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     As we all know, nowadays, low-carbon life has not only become a lifestyle advocated by our country, but also become a new fashion. However, there are still many people who have no idea how to live a low- carbon life. Let me tell you some ways to live a low-carbon life.
       First, turn off the lights when they're not in use.Second ，make sure you turn off the tap when you're not using water.Third, do not set the air- conditioning temperature below26°C in summer, This is because 26°C is a relatively energy saving temperature setting.
      Last but not least, it's a good idea to choose to walk or ride a bike if you don't go far away. Let's start a low-carbon life! Even the simplest daily activities can make a difference to the environment.

这篇作文整体结构清晰，内容较为完整，围绕着介绍低碳生活的几种方式展开。以下是评分以及建议：

**评分：24分**

**档次：第二档**

**优点：**
1. **内容要点表达清楚**：文章清楚地表达了如何开始低碳生活的多个具体建议，如关灯、关闭水龙头、合理设置空调温度、选择步行或骑自行车等。
2. **语言运用基本正确**：整体语法结构简单明了，基本能满足任务要求。

**不足：**
1. **词汇运用可以更丰富**：文章中的语法和词汇较为简单，可以使用更多的多样化词汇或复杂句型来增加内容的深度。
2. **详尽程度略显不足**：虽然列举了一些措施，但每项措施的解释可以更加详细。例如，可以说明为什么这些习惯会对环境产生积极影响。
3. **缺乏个人观点或感受**：在阐述客观事实后，可加入一些个人的看法或感受，以增强文章的说服力和吸引力。

**批改建议：**
- 可以在每一项建议后面加入进一步的解释或扩展，以让读者更好地理解这些措施对低碳生活的影响。
- 尝试使用连接词（如例如、此外、同时等）来提升段落之间的流畅性。
- 增加对低碳生活的个人见解或经历，以使文章更具个人特色和吸引力。