Traditional Chinese Festival

  Dear John,
  How is everything going?I'm writing this email to introduce one of the traditional Chinese festivals-the Mid-Autumn Festival.
  The Mid-Autumn Festival originated from ancient people in order to celebrate the autumn's harvest.With the rapid development of society, more and more focus is placed on celebration of traditional festivals.For one thing, in terms of governmental behaviors, government make relative policies to give people holidays.For another thing, in terms of public behavior, there are many ways to celebrate the festival, such as arranging young people to dance and sing under the moon.Last but not least, in terms of personal behavior, all of us prepare a lot of delicious food with our family members.
  If you have any questions and concerns,don't hesitate to let me know.
​  I look forward to hearing from you.
                                                 Best Regards,
                                                                Li Ke

Overall, this is a well-structured email that clearly introduces the Mid-Autumn Festival. The writer has successfully conveyed the main points regarding the festival's origin and how it is celebrated in modern society. However, there are some areas that could be improved to make the writing more effective.

1. **Content and Clarity**:
   - The description of the Mid-Autumn Festival includes valuable information about its origin and current celebrations. However, the link between ancient practices and modern celebrations could be more explicit.
   - While the email mentions what government, public, and personal behaviors entail during the festival, it briefly touches on these points without providing specific examples or details (e.g., mentioning traditional foods like mooncakes or lantern activities could enrich the content).

2. **Structure**:
   - The email is organized logically with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
   - Transitional phrases such as "For one thing," "For another thing," and "Last but not least," help the flow but could be more varied for stylistic improvement.

3. **Language and Grammar**:
   - The language used is generally appropriate for the task, but there are minor grammatical inaccuracies:
     - "government make relative policies" should be "the government makes relevant policies."
     - Consider rephrasing "arranging young people to dance and sing under the moon" to "organizing events where young people can dance and sing under the moonlight."
   - Ensure spaces after punctuation marks (e.g., "How is everything going?I'm" should be "How is everything going? I'm").

4. **Suggestions**:
   - Add more cultural elements related to the Mid-Autumn Festival, such as the significance of mooncakes or sharing time with family under the full moon.
   - Use more varied transitional phrases to improve readability and engagement.
   - Consider providing historical anecdotes or fun facts to captivate John’s interest further.

Based on these considerations, this email would fall into the second band (19-24 points) due to its clear expression of all key content, adequate language use with minor errors affecting fluency, and good overall organization. To elevate this to the top band, consider enriching the content with vivid examples and improving language precision.