分析句子

修改句子：
The captain, as well as the other players, were  tired.

Keil 发表于 2023-05-16 21:30
修改句子：
The captain, as well as the other playe ...

The captain, as well as the other players, was tired.

admin 发表于 2023-5-16 21:30
The captain, as well as the other players, was tired.

为什么这样修改？

Keil 发表于 2023-05-16 21:31
为什么这样修改？

这样修改是因为在这个句子中，主语“the captain”和“the other players”是并列主语，需要遵循就近原则。在这个句子中，就近原则指向了“the captain”，因此谓语动词应该用单数形式“was”，而不是复数形式“were”。

修改句子，并分析修改原因：When dipped in mustard, Sam said the sausage was excellent.

Keil 发表于 2023-05-16 21:33
修改句子，并分析修改原因：When dipped in mustard,  ...

Sam said the sausage was excellent when dipped in mustard.

修改原因：将原句中的状语从句转换为了时间状语，使用了正常语序。这样修改可以使句子更加简洁和清晰。

修改句子，并分析修改原因：
A Frenchman murdered two wives he didn't like their cooking.

Keil 发表于 2023-05-16 21:35
修改句子，并分析修改原因：
A Frenchman murdered tw ...

A Frenchman murdered two wives whom he didn't like their cooking.修改原因：原句中的“he didn't like their cooking”所指的是“two wives”，而根据语法规则，定语从句中应该用“whom”代替“they”，所以要将其改为“whom he didn't like their cooking”。

修改句子，并分析修改原因：
Annie's dress was old, faded,and it had wrinkles.

Keil 发表于 2023-05-16 21:38
修改句子，并分析修改原因：
Annie's dress was old,  ...

Annie's dress was old, faded and wrinkled.

修改原因： 原句中使用了两个并列的谓语，而这两个谓语都与主语“Annie's dress”相关，可以将其合并成为一个谓语形容词短语，使得表达更加简洁明了。