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1.介绍你的主要爱好；
2.喜欢其中一项爱好的理由。
In recently, as people's living standard improves, everyone have a lot hobbies.  I  also has  some hobbies, such as playing basketball, going fishing, reading books and singing songs. But my favorite hobby is playing basketball.
Basketball is five games, two teams compete, totaling ten players. It aim taking basketball shooting the circle . Playing basketball has a lot advantage. On the one hand, you can exercise your heart, lung , and  muscle. On the other hand, you can add teamwork, which can bring a lot of benefit in works and studies.
In a word, I like playing basketball and have benefit from it.

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In recent years, as people's living standards have improved, there are many hobbies that people engage in. Among my hobbies are playing basketball, going fishing, reading books, and singing songs. However, my favorite hobby is playing basketball.

Basketball is a team sport that involves five players on each side aiming to shoot the ball into the opposing team's basket. Playing basketball has several benefits. Firstly, it helps to improve your cardiovascular health, lung capacity, and muscle strength. Moreover, it promotes teamwork, which can be beneficial both in work and academic settings.

Overall, I enjoy playing basketball because it provides me with physical exercise and social interaction.